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Posted 10/6/2008 4:52:03 PM


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Posted 10/6/2008 4:57:10 PM


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Bumpity-bump-bump(:

wow; that wasnt cheesy at all XD

 

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Posted 10/6/2008 5:30:15 PM


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Okay, well, your horse is getting too round and your heels could be down lower. Look up and get your thumbs up, and turn your elbows in. And I don't know if this is just me, but the horses' bum looks a bit akward.


You're wayyy over jumping, and over the pommel. You're gripping with your knee which has caused your leg to slide back, and point your toes in. The horse seems to really be sticking out its nose, and your release is a bit loose. It also looks like you're craning your neck a bit.


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Posted 10/6/2008 6:16:47 PM


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Here's a little hint:

If you don't want to be COMPLETELY torn apart for your "awful training methods," and such, don't post pictures of you riding with draw reins. It just never goes well.

Take it Cloppy!


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Posted 10/6/2008 6:20:14 PM


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And let's not fly over our horse's neck, shall we?
It's bad enough the poor thing is forced into an artifical-behind-the-bit-on-the- forehand-frame because of your lack of inabilty to actually put him in a correct one. ;)

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Posted 10/6/2008 6:21:56 PM


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[quote]*Clip~Clop* (10/6/2008)
And let's not fly over our horse's neck, shall we?
It's bad enough the poor thing is forced into an artifical-behind-the-bit-on-the- forehand-frame because of your lack of inabilty to actually put him in a correctone. ;)

BAYUM.
Spotty?[/quote]

Once upon a time Spotty and Cloppy actually posted helpful critiques.
But ohhh, how times change.


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Posted 10/6/2008 6:24:35 PM


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almost • spotless (10/6/2008)
*Clip~Clop* (10/6/2008)
And let's not fly over our horse's neck, shall we?
It's bad enough the poor thing is forced into an artifical-behind-the-bit-on-the- forehand-frame because of your lack of inabilty to actually put him in a correctone. ;)

BAYUM.
Spotty?


Once upon a time Spotty and Cloppy actually posted helpful critiques.
But ohhh, how times change.

Yes.
Oh, yes they do. xD



 
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Posted 10/6/2008 6:35:26 PM


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1st: You need to keep your eyes up and bend your elbows. Also, the horse you're riding is over-rounded. And, just curious, why are you using sidereins, they're not helping your horse.


2nd: You are waaaaaaay overjumping. You're way over the pommel, your leg slipped back (because you're gripping with your knees), and you have no weight in your heels.  You need to bring your bum back about a mile, and center it over the saddle so your weight is more evenly distributed. Put some more weight in your heels, and don't grip with your knees.


 
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Posted 10/6/2008 6:37:37 PM